Starred Review ALA Booklist
(Sun Sep 01 00:00:00 CDT 1991)
Starred Review Every word counts in Avi's newest book, which plunges readers into a series of skillfully orchestrated incidents that fuse into tense drama. Like a theatrical performance in its economy of description and phrase, the novel combines diary entries, phone conversations, discussions, and high school faculty memos into a provocative exploration of the way emotions and preconceptions define and distort truth. Philip Malloy desperately wants to be on the track team, but his low grade in English class prevents him from even trying out. He blames his teacher, Miss Narwin, and when she reprimands him for humming the national anthem during homeroom (school rules dictate "respectful, silent attention"), he defies her. Eventually he's sent to the assistant principal, who, unable to convince Philip to alter his behavior, invokes a suspension. A simple rules infraction neatly resolved? Not quite. After a newspaper reporter prints a biased, inflammatory version of the story, Phil's expulsion takes on patriotic overtones and becomes a local political hot potato that causes major problems for everyone concerned. Irony infuses the cleverly structured plot: Phil couldn't care less that he's headline news--he just wants a different English teacher; Miss Narwin's request for a stipend to further her education becomes "proof" she can't do the job instead of "proof" she's a good teacher trying to become better. And there's much, much more. The implications of what occurs are as intriguing as the novel's cynicism. Patriotism, is, of course, not Avi's real concern. He's writing about self-expression in a larger sense, and he's sharply critical of human behavior with regard to it. None of his characters triumphs. All share blame for what happens, and no one escapes consequences--not the perfidious school superintendent concerned about an upcoming budget vote; not self-absorbed Phil; not even Miss Narwin, who learns the hardest lesson of all. Avi levels the harshest denunciation, though, on the media, suggesting purposeful irresponsibility on their part.Pessimistic and somber, the book fascinates as much as it disturbs. It challenges us to reexamine our ethical standards and to set aside kindergarten concepts of truth and falsity in determining the conduct of our lives. Is the principal being honest when she describes Phil's vocalizing as "loud and raucous"? The answer, according to Avi, is not a simple yes or no. There's no question that the book sets out to make a point. It succeeds. That makes it ideal material for the whole-language curriculum, bound to foster debate on a wide range of issues--from parent-child communication to media accountability to personal values. But the deceptively simple story also stands up as riveting entertainment, and like the best in YA literature, it will be talked about and read again and again.
Horn Book
A powerful, explosive novel that involves the reader from start to finish chronicles the struggles of freshman Philip Malloy. His antipathy toward his English teacher catapults him into a school protest involving the National Anthem. The construction is flawless; the characters are painfully human. The tragedy moves inexorably to an ironic conclusion that raises gooseflesh.
Kirkus Reviews
Ninth-grader Philip has never been in trouble, but he's upset because his English grade is keeping him off the track team. Meanwhile, though the rule is ``respectful, silent attention,'' he hums along with the daily playing of the national anthem—a habit ignored by his jocular homeroom teacher. Then he's moved to the homeroom of Miss Narwin, his English teacher- -well-liked because she's fair but rigid, humorless, and out of touch with modern kids. When she tries to enforce the silence rule, Philip responds with offhand rudeness borne of his distress about track plus his chronic tongue-tied style; the ensuing confrontation escalates into a two-day suspension followed by national media attention based on the erroneous belief that Philip has been denied the right to express his patriotism. Skillfully composing his story from school memos, news clips, dialogues, and Philip's diary, Avi shows how well-meaning people can generate misinformation through a combination of interrupting or simply not listening, shaping facts to suit their own goals, letting preconceptions muddy thought, or just lacking the will and the skill to get things straight. The garbled conversations here are all too believable; only one reporter makes an intelligent effort to find out what really happened, and his story is never printed. Nobody wins: Philip transfers to a school that doesn't have track, and Miss Narwin is forced to take leave. Wryly satirical: nothing but the deplorable truth about our increasingly inarticulate, media-driven society. (Fiction. 11+)"
School Library Journal
Gr 6-9-- Ninth grader Philip Malloy finds himself unable to participate on the track team because of his failing grade in English. Convinced the teacher, Margaret Narwin, dislikes him, he concocts a scheme to get transferred from her homeroom: instead of standing ``at respectful, silent attention'' during the national anthem, Philip hums. Throughout the ensuing disciplinary problems at school, his parents take his side, ignore the fact that he is breaking a school rule, and concentrate on issues of patriotism. The conflict between Philip and his school escalates, and he quickly finds the situation out of his control; local community leaders, as well as the national news media, become involved. At this point, the novel surges forward to a heartbreaking, but totally believable, conclusion. Avi carefully sets forth the events in the story, advancing the plot through conversations between students, Philip's parents, school personnel, and community politicians, while Philip's point of view is revealed through his diary entries, and Margaret Narwin's through letters to her sister. Also enriching the narrative are copies of school memos and newspaper articles, transcripts of speeches delivered, and copies of letters received by both Philip and his teacher; each document provides another perspective on the conflict and illuminates the many themes that beg to be discussed--most notably the irony of lives destroyed because of the misuse of power and the failure of people to communicate. Admirably well crafted and thought provoking. --Ellen Fader, Westport Public Library, CT