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Long distance swimming. Fiction.
Loss. Fiction.
Mothers. Fiction.
Best friends. Fiction.
Friendship. Fiction.
Sometimes you must risk everything to find out who matters.Tully has her mother's nose and auburn hair-and even her mother's maiden name as her given name. Tully is also athletic and competitive like her mother. She's been swimming competitively since she was 6, and now, at 12, she's encouraged by her mother to be the youngest person ever to swim across Lake Tahoe. But then Mom stops taking her meds, begins exercising obsessively, and suddenly leaves without saying goodbye. Seeing Dad "swallowed up / in the glow of his computer screen," Tully decides that if she succeeds in swimming across Lake Tahoe, her mother will come back, "Because I am a winner / and I can do HARD THINGS." Tully trains in secret, and early one July morning, she sets out across the lake with her best friend, Arch, kayaking alongside her. Laid out in parts titled "Hour One," "Hour Two," and so on, this accessible but sometimes overly obvious story pulls readers into the heart of a grueling 12.1-mile swim. As Tully struggles mentally with the confusion and guilt brought on by her mother's departure and she thrashes her way across a suddenly stormy lake while Arch yells at her to quit, she comes to an honest assessment of herself-and her mother. The varied and creative layout of the text adds an interesting component to the free-verse, present-tense narrative, told from Tully's first-person point of view. Characters read white.Packs a powerful punch. (Verse fiction. 9-12)
Publishers Weekly (Fri Oct 06 00:00:00 CDT 2023)Twelve-year-old Tully Birch attempts to set a record as the youngest swimmer to complete the Godfather swim, a 12.1-mile trek across Lake Tahoe, in this carefully crafted verse novel by Sumner (
Gr 3–7— Twelve-year-old Tully is set to make history as the youngest person to swim the challenging 12-mile "Godfather Swim" in Lake Tahoe. But her motivation isn't just about the athletic feat. She's hoping this achievement will catch her depressed mother's attention, coaxing her to return home after leaving the family. Tully's been training in secret, hidden from her father with the support of her best friend, Arch. Now, poised for the swim, the question looms: Will she complete it or will fate intervene? Told through verse, this quick read captures the emotional turmoil of a young girl grappling with her mother's abandonment. As Tully pushes ahead in the water, she reflects on the past, trying to understand what might have driven her mother away. Each mile not only propels the race forward but delves deeper into Tully's life story, drawing readers into her struggles and emotions. VERDICT A wonderful read that will resonate with athletes, those navigating family challenges, and even reluctant readers; a strong addition to all middle grade library collections.— Kate Rao
Kirkus Reviews
Publishers Weekly (Fri Oct 06 00:00:00 CDT 2023)
School Library Journal (Thu Feb 01 00:00:00 CST 2024)
How It Starts
Air temp: 44 degrees.
Water temp: 68 degrees.
Body temp: 98.3 degrees.
Mental state of swimmer: Calm. Loose. Ready.
Mental state of support crew: Unknown and highly variable.
Arch looks like he's going to puke--
hands on knees,
head down like a dog,
orange life vest bunched around his ears.
Poor Arch.
He wasn't meant for the open water.
He's a worrier.
You can't be a worrier and a swimmer.
The water demands trust.
Whatever conditions...
Whatever's below...
Whatever your head tells you...
You have to believe you're going to make it
to the other side.
The minute you start to doubt yourself,
you make mistakes.
The water doesn't forgive mistakes.
Me?
I'm a believer
in the power of the water
and in myself.
I don't make mistakes.
While we're still on shore,
Arch adjusts his life vest and breathes in through his nose.
I check his watch.
"5:58 a.m. You've got two minutes to get it together," I say,
and look out over the dark blue of Lake Tahoe,
which is just beginning to twitch awake.
"Tully, I can't," Arch says, like he has a choice.
"You have to.
You swore it."
I don't remind him when or why he swore it.
He picks up the kayak,
drags it to the water's edge.
He remembers.
Behind me, Cave Rock would cast a shadow
if the sun were high enough.
They call her Lady of the Lake.
If you squint hard enough,
the rock looks like a woman.
I think it's a stretch.
If you try hard enough,
anything can look like anything.
Unless it disappears,
and then all the imagining in the world
won't turn it into what you want,
which brings me back to today.
"One minute," Arch whispers,
and swipes his dark hair out of his eyes.
We look out over the water.
I nudge his shoulder.
"You can do it."
He nudges me back.
"That's what I'm supposed to say to you."
This will be the last time we touch for at least six hours--
if I do this right,
which I will,
because I do not make mistakes.
I pull my goggles down and step in.
Lady of the Lake, wish me luck.
Not that I believe in luck.
Or second chances.
But I believe in the power of the water
to do what it needs to do
for me,
for Mom.
"Call it," I say to Arch,
who swallows,
lifts up his phone,
presses record.
"Time is 6:00 a.m.
Participant has left the natural shore."
His voice breaks on shore,
but he keeps going:
"The marathon swim has begun."
Excerpted from Deep Water by Jamie Sumner
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“Readers will feel every wave of Tully’s emotions as she risks everything to try to get her mom’s attention. A powerful novel in verse.” —Lisa Fipps, author of Printz Honor book Starfish
A middle grade novel in verse that “packs a powerful punch” (Kirkus Reviews) from acclaimed author Jamie Sumner that spans one girl’s marathon swim over twelve miles and six hours, calling her mom back home with every stroke.
Six hours.
One marathon swim.
That’s all Tully Birch needs to get her life straightened out. With the help of her best friend, Arch, Tully braves the waters of Lake Tahoe to break the record for the youngest person ever to complete the famous “Godfather swim.” She wants to achieve something no one in the world has done, because if she does, maybe, just maybe, her mom will come back.
The swim starts off well—heart steady, body loose, Arch in charge of snacks as needed. But for Tully, all that time alone with her thoughts allows memories to surface. And in the silence of deep waters, sadness can sink you. When the swim turns dangerous, Tully fights for her survival. Does she keep going and risk her own safety and Arch’s? Or does she quit to save them both, even if it means giving up hope that her mother will return?