The Brimstone Journals
The Brimstone Journals
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Candlewick Press
Annotation: In a series of short interconnected poems, students at a high school nicknamed Brimstone reveal the violence existing and growing in their lives.
Genre: [Poetry]
 
Reviews: 10
Catalog Number: #4611593
Format: Paperback
Publisher: Candlewick Press
Copyright Date: 2001
Edition Date: 2004 Release Date: 01/05/04
Pages: 113 pages
ISBN: 0-7636-1742-3
ISBN 13: 978-0-7636-1742-4
Dewey: 811
LCCN: 00037886
Dimensions: 23 cm.
Language: English
Reviews:
ALA Booklist

He wants to be stopped. The teenage voices in this story sound like those interviewed on the nightly news about the latest high-school shootings. Fifteen students in a suburban high school speak in short poetic monologues, which are very easy to read. They are all troubled; some have a suppressed rage that could explode. Tran feels boxed in by his immigrant father's dreams; Kelli is trying to break with her macho boyfriend, Damon; Allison, who is being sexually abused by her stepdad, is ready to kill; David retreats and watches violent videos; Joseph is sick of his parents' passivity; Lester is always the bully's victim. At the center is Boyd, violent, racist, desperate, encouraged by an adult to join the Brotherhood and build an arsenal of guns and chemicals. Boyd makes a list of everybody who ever blew me off, flipped me off, or pissed me off. The students hear about the list. The power is in the feeling of violence brewing. Who will be drawn in? Boyd even warns his favorite people to stay home first period on Tuesday. That's when someone realizes that Boyd wants you to stop him. Will someone tell the authorities before it's too late? The ending is too hopeful; too many problems are solved. But Koertge avoids simplistic therapy, and the dramatic monologues are spare, poetic, and immediate, great for readers' theater and opening group discussion. See the Read-alikes on the opposite page for books about outsiders and violence in contemporary high schools.

Horn Book

Fifteen students representing extremes of teenage social problems (alienation, race issues, teen sex, etc.) bring their high school experience to life in this collection of free verse, culminating in a Columbine-type massacre only barely averted. The characterization is so thin that the students become their issues, and the verse is unremarkable, but with such potent ingredients the result is powerful.

Kirkus Reviews

In a series of free-verse poems, Koertge ( Heart of the City , 1998, etc.) sketches out both a large cast of teenagers and an issues-heavy tale of high-school violence narrowly averted. As 15 Branston High seniors, few of them speaking up enough to become distinct characters, make out, break up, and complain about shiftless/demanding/evangelical/too-familiar fathers, classmate Troy adds names to a private list, and stockpiles guns at home, nerving himself for an "apocalypse"—a word he can't always even pronounce. Finally, he gives his intentions away so openly that three teens (with some difficulty) arouse the local police, and another Columbine-style catastrophe is nipped in the bud. With one character citing violence statistics, and others feeling physical attraction to a same-sex friend, becoming an environmental activist, experiencing date rape, reporting potential sexual abuse to a counselor, and encountering racist attitudes, this loses its identity as a story, coming off more as a utilitarian discussion-starter. Even fans of Mel Glenn's soapy novels-in-poetry will be unimpressed. (Fiction. YA)

School Library Journal

Gr 9 Up-The students at Branston (aka Brimstone), Koertge's "everyman's high school," know that violence is a fact of life circa 2001. But living in its midst, knowing it's there, and embracing it are very different things. In addition, the young people have other pressing concerns. Kitty's worried about eating-or, rather, not eating. Sheila's got a crush on another girl. Damon's looking for some action from his girlfriend. And Boyd is angry, just plain angry-and motivated. In short poems fashioned like journal entries, 15 kids are profiled, and their sometimes-raw voices provide poignant, honest, and fresh insights into today's teens. Branston could be anywhere, and, sadly, Boyd is an all-too-familiar character. He fuels his anger into a mental hit list of students who will be the target of his revenge. His credo is, "you're invincible until your number comes up." The profiles lead up to a clash of personalities and a strong conclusion in which tragedy is averted. It could have just as easily gone the other way. Young adults will have no trouble relating to the language and banter of these teens. They may even recognize themselves or their friends, for better or worse.-Sharon Korbeck, Waupaca Area Public Library, WI Copyright 2001 Cahners Business Information.

Word Count: 8,491
Reading Level: 4.2
Interest Level: 7-12
Accelerated Reader: reading level: 4.2 / points: 1.0 / quiz: 46124 / grade: Upper Grades
Reading Counts!: reading level:5.5 / points:5.0 / quiz:Q28221
Lexile: 610L
Lester
My dad’d freak if he knew I played
with it, but I can’t help myself. And
I’m not hurting anybody.
The bullets are across the room
in his sock drawer. The Glock is by
the bed, same place as the condoms.
I like to hold it in my hand. Everything
gets sharper, I don’t know why.
I feel skinnier instead of just this big
bag of fries and Coke and pepperoni.
If I take off my clothes, it’s cool
on my skin.
I’d never hurt anybody but if I did
this is how I’d do it—butt naked.
And I’d start in the gym. They wouldn’t
laugh then, would they? The jocks would
crap their pants. The girls’d kiss my fat
feet.

Tran
My father came here with his parents when
he was ten. In the boat, there was room
for two to sleep, so they took turns
standing up.
By 1980 they owned a small market.
By 1990 three more. My mother and father
often worked twenty hours a day. I started
stocking shelves at age six.
Everybody warned against black people,
but who turned out to be full of hatred
for our prosperity? Others like us, some
from a village not five kilometers away
from where my mother was born.
Father does not want me to forget the country
I have never seen. Every day an hour of
Vietnamese only. Then another of music
with traditional instruments.
He wants me to be richer than he, more
successful. Yet he begrudges one hundred
dollars for the ugly new glasses I need.
His dreams are like a box I cannot put down.

Boyd
Dad drifts in about three a.m. a couple of nights
ago, and I’m just finishing up Dog Day Afternoon
for the nineteenth time.
He’s still a little faded and sometimes that
makes him all paternal, so he gets us a couple
of beers. I’ve seen this before when he’s shot
some pretty good pool and some hootchie’s
told him he looks like Harrison Ford.
Things are gonna change, he says. There’s
gonna be a lunch for me to take to school
every day, sandwiches with that brown
mustard. No more doing his laundry.
And you know that dog I always wanted?
It’s mine.
Part of me wants it to be true so bad my teeth
hurt. But I’m not holding my breath.
"So how’s school?"
Here we go.
After he calls me stupid about ten times,
I split. I run for like a block but I’m totally
out of shape, so I just walk until I stop wanting
to kill him. Then I crash in the basement.

Allison
A thirty-nine-year-old man in California
drives his Cadillac into a playground
and kills two kids because he wanted
to execute innocent children.
That isn’t a sign of social collapse?
Twenty-five million teenagers go to
twenty thousand schools in the U.S.
Ten kids, TEN KIDS, in seven schools
did all the shooting, ALL OF IT,
in 1998-99.
In the same two years, grownups
in southern California alone massacred
forty people.
I know what I’m talking about. I did
research for this paper I had to write.
I got a B- because my report "wasn’t
focused."
Really? Could that be because when I
was typing it my stepfather kept trying
to massage my shoulders because I looked
"tense"?
I’ve told him I hate that. I’ve told my mom.
She says he’s just being friendly.


The Brimstone Journals. Copyright (c) 2001 Ron Koertge. Candlewick Press, Inc., Cambridge, MA

Excerpted from The Brimstone Journals by Ronald Koertge
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Ron Koertge's startling, often poignant poetic novel evokes a suburban high school both familiar and terrifying.

The Branston High School Class of 2001 seems familiar enough on the surface: there’s the Smart One, the Fat Kid, Social Conscience, Bad Girl, Good Girl, Jock, Anorexic, Dyke, Rich Boy, Sistah, Stud . . . and Boyd, an Angry Young Man who has just made a dangerous new friend. Now he’s making a list.

The Branston High School Class of 2001. You might think you know them. You might be surprised.

Narrated by fifteen teenage characters, this startling, often poignant poetic novel evokes a suburban high school both familiar and terrifying — and provides an ideal opportunity for young adults to discuss violence in schools.


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