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Witchcraft. Fiction.
Best friends. Fiction.
Friendship. Fiction.
Bullying. Fiction.
Schools. Fiction.
Demonology. Fiction.
Seventh-grader Grace and her four best friends are wannabe witches, casting spells that never work and recording them in Grace's notebook. But after the girls use a Ouija Board, Una, one of the five, starts acting oddly, and the spells in the notebook begin to come true, one by one. This has the girls in a panic because the last spell on the list could result in the death of their bullying classmate Tracy. The girls race against the clock to save Tracy, turning to "local crazy person" Mrs. Quinlan, who explains that the girls have opened a portal, that a demon has possessed Una, and that it must be banished. The plot in this debut from first-time author McGann (originally published in Ireland) is set on high speed, with events piling up fast and furious, leading to a satisfying, if overly neat climax. While the girls don't always stand out as distinct characters, their bond is genuine; readers will worry just enough for their safety in this fun and lightly spooky story. Ages 9-12. (June)
School Library Journal (Tue Jul 01 00:00:00 CDT 2014)Gr 5-8 Una has had enough of being bullied by Tracy Murphy, a professional football player packed into a schoolgirl's body. Grace is sure that perfect, popular James O'Connor will never notice her. Jenny is fed up with helping to take care of her baby sister. Rachel wishes she could know what it feels like to be the star athlete for once. Adie wants to be fluent in French long enough to get her language teacher off her back. Together, these five best friends turn to witchcraft to transform their wishes into reality. The girls perform 10 magic spells from The Great Book of the Occult but become frustrated when none of them seems to be working. Then one night, after a Ouija board session gone terribly awry, everything changes, and the things that they wished for finally begin to come true. Obnoxious Andrew Wallace pees his pants in class. A freak snowstorm results in an unexpected snow day. James O'Connor asks Grace out on a date. Soon, however, the girls learn that everything comes with a price. And in this case, the cost could be deadly. With wisdom, humor, and just enough spookiness, McGann weaves a charming cautionary tale about the importance of being careful of what you wish for. While demons, ghosts, and spirit channeling will undoubtedly hook readers, relatable main characters and situations will keep them turning the pages. Liz Overberg, Darlington School, Rome, GA
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School Library Journal (Tue Jul 01 00:00:00 CDT 2014)
Chapter 1
"Two minutes!" whispered Grace Brennan, cradling her watch in her hand.
"Quiet, Grace!" said Ms. Lemon, whipping around to point at her with a marker.
"Sorry, Miss."
Grace kept her eyes down until she was sure the teacher had returned to the whiteboard. When the coast was clear, she quickly mouthed "one minute" to her friends and they all turned their attention to the boy sitting third from the left in the front row. Grace kept her eyes on his back, trying to picture him leaping out of his chair and bounding out of the room. Glancing back at her watch, she held out her fingers to count down from five, four, three, two, one...
Nothing.
The girls held their concentration for a few more moments.
Still nothing.
Andrew Wallace hadn't budged. Grace flipped open her notebook, ran her finger down the list to spell number eight, "Make Andrew Wallace pee his pants in French," and marked it with a big X. She sighed, flipped the notebook closed as she exchanged looks with the others, and turned her attention back to the irregular verbs scrawled across the board at the front of the room.
When the bell finally rang, signaling the end of class, Jenny tightened the laces on her purple boots and carelessly pulled a loose thread out of one woolly sock.
"I'm disappointed," she said, shaking the thread from her fingers. "That would've been worth seeing."
"And he totally deserved it as well," said Adie. "That time he pulled your chair out from under you, and you sprained your elbow. And that ‘rat-tail hair' thing he said to Grace in front of everybody. What does that even mean, anyway?"
"It means," answered Grace, "that my hair's horrible and greasy and looks like rats' tails."
She tugged at a few dull, split-end strands. To others, she'd call her hair kind of sandy-colored, but it was more like mousy brown. And it never shone, no matter how much conditioner she used.
"That's so stupid," said Adie, pushing her own tightly curled dark locks out of her brown eyes. "I'd kill for your hair. You don't even have to use a flatiron. It's poker-straight all the time."
"I don't care what he says, anyway," said Grace. "Just thought he needed a short, sharp shock. How cool would it have been if it had actually worked?"
She looked up at Jenny, who was a little taller and the only athletic one in the bunch.
"How many spells is that now?" Jenny asked.
"Eight," said Grace.
"Well," sighed Adie, "ninth one's a charm. Wait and see."
"I won't hold my breath," Grace said, fixing her uniform tie so it sat neatly into her pressed collar. She slipped her schoolbag onto her shoulder and followed the other two out into the hallway. Halfway down the corridor, she felt the heavy weight of a body landing on her from behind.
"Ow! Knock it off, Una! You caught my hair!"
"Which is not rat-taily," Adie said quickly, catching Grace's bag as it dropped to the ground.
Grace shrugged her friend off her back and sighed as Una threw her arms around the other two. Her short, black bob framed her pretty elfin features as she gazed up at them eagerly.
"So did it work?" she said. "Did Andrew Wallace get his just reward?" Her gray eyes were lit up with excitement.
"Nope," said Jenny.
"Aw, fudge," said Una, slumping between them and sliding her arms from their shoulders. She shook her head and gave a very loud and exaggerated sigh. "Had my fingers and toes crossed all the way through Spanish and everything. Why didn't it work?!"
"Maybe you have to use a more personal object," offered Jenny. "I mean something that the person really cares about. I'm pretty sure Andrew's not missing his math notebook right now."
"Come to think of it," said Grace, "I'm not sure I've ever seen him open that notebook."
"Oh God! Don't look now!" hissed Adie. "The Beast."
The Beast was Tracy Murphy. Five foot ten inches of pure evil. Tracy wasn't overweight, but her solid mass was at least triple the width of any other girl at Saint John's. It was as if a professional football player had been packed into a schoolgirl's body, bulging with rippling muscle that threatened to burst at the seams. The intimidating look was topped off with dark red curls slicked back into a high ponytail and a thick layer of blue eyeliner beneath each dark, soulless eye. Tracy was the stuff of nightmares-and Una was her victim of choice.
"Hey, freak," Tracy snapped, giving Una's elbow a sharp dig, "I told you you're not allowed in this block."
Una's mouth opened and closed like a goldfish-but no sound came out.
"Leave her alone," said Jenny. With occult symbols and names of heavy metal bands Wite-Outed all over her schoolbag, Jenny looked a little tougher than the other girls. But though she was tall and always stood her ground, when it came to sheer size, she couldn't compete with the Beast.
"You'll be left alone," said Tracy, not taking her eyes off Una, "when you get out of my block. The D block's mine, and I don't like looking at your ugly face. So take it somewhere else."
"Yeah," a voice behind them snickered, "we don't like looking at your ugly face."
Grace glanced back at Bev, the larger of Tracy's devoted henchmen, and fought the urge to comment on the girl's ridiculously oversprayed hairdo. But Bev was never without Trish, who stood nearby, sporting an equally comical hairstyle, and if she dared insult either of them, their boss would surely intervene.
"Our lunchroom's in this block," Adie squeaked, "so she has to come through here."
"Then you'd better get into your lunchroom," Tracy sneered, leaning menacingly toward Adie, "before I lose my temper."
"Come on," Una whispered, grabbing Adie's hand. The four girls hurried to the safety of the room, trying not to run as Trish's and Bev's wicked laughter filled the hallway. They piled into the room, slamming the door and pressing themselves against it.
"So," said a musical voice. "You ran into her then?"
Startled, they turned together to see Rachel sitting on a table, with her feet on a chair. She was gazing into a small compact mirror as she swept some powder across her porcelain cheeks. Her pale blue eyes were already perfectly lined with black pencil, and her lips glistened with pink gloss. Glancing up, she snapped the compact shut and swung her legs onto the floor. Grace felt a pang of envy as Rachel's chestnut hair spilled over her shoulders in stylish, glossy layers.
"Yeah." Grace sighed and pulled her bag off her shoulders. "She's there every day now. It's getting worse."
"You okay?" Rachel asked, tipping her head toward Una.
"Yeah, I'm fine," Una mumbled, still blushing from the encounter.
"I don't get why she picks on you," said Rachel. "It's like she just chooses people at random."
"Just forget about it," said Una. "Let's talk about something else."
"Like a certain not-very-nice person peeing his pants in class?" said Rachel with a hopeful smile.
"Didn't work," said Grace, wiping the smile off her friend's face. "We think we're not picking personal enough items or something. Maybe we need his watch or his pen."
"Or his old gym shorts!" squealed Una.
"Ugh, gross!"
"Speaking of gross, are you really putting M&Ms on that sandwich?" Rachel looked in horror at Jenny, who was perched with her lunch box and a bag of candy on her knees.
"Honestly," said Jenny, "it's delicious."
"But there's coleslaw in there!"
"Trust me," Jenny said, gently sprinkling more M&Ms into her open sandwich, "my mom used to eat this all the time when she was pregnant with my little sister, and I thought it was the grossest thing ever. But then I tried it, and I swear I couldn't eat a sandwich without them now. Yum, yummedy-yum!"
The girls groaned in unison as Jenny took a great big bite and crunched loudly on the salad and sugar-coated chocolate mix.
"That'll do terrible things to your skin," said Rachel. She turned to Grace. "So more personal personal items then?"
"Maybe," said Grace, "but I'm just not sure we're going about this the right way. We've tried a bunch of spells, and not one of them has even slightly worked."
"What about that time we tried to get Mr. McQuaid to talk gobbledygook in history," said Adie, "and the next day he said ‘French Relovution'?"
Grace raised an unconvinced eyebrow.
"I don't think that was us."
"It might have been us," Adie reasoned.
"If that was us," said Rachel, "it was pretty lame."
"Yeah," said Jenny with her mouth full. "What's the point of trying if that's all we can manage?"
"Ooh ooh ohh!" Una exclaimed suddenly. "I have the best idea. Let's do a love spell. That would be totally awesome."
"On whom?" asked Grace.
"What about James O'Connor?" said Rachel. "You like him."
"No, I don't!" cried Grace.
"Yes, you do. You blushed when he sat beside you in geography the other day."
"How would you know?" said Grace. "You were sitting behind me."
"Your ears went pink." Rachel grinned.
"Whatever," said Grace, her cheeks coloring. "I don't like him."
"Well, let's try it anyway," said Una, eyeing her friend with a smile. "It probably won't work, so it doesn't really matter, does it?"
They all looked toward Grace.
"We can do it if you want," she said at last, sweeping her mousy brown hair out of her eyes and feigning a lack of interest. "I don't care."
"I'm taking that as a yes. Woo-hoo!" Una bounced to her feet, giving a little dancing wriggle. "This is gonna be so much fun."
"Will you sit down, Una?" Rachel said, cringing. "People can see in the window."
"Can't sit down," Una said, shaking her butt at Rachel as if she couldn't help it. "Too excited."
"Please knock it off, I'm begging you."
Una wriggled even more as a few students passing by outside pointed and laughed. Rachel hid her face in her hands.
"We're going to need something personal of James's," Jenny said.
"I'm in his English class after lunch." Una finally sat down, a little out of breath. "So I'll steal something out of his pencil case."
"Anyone else worried that people might start to notice we're stealing their stuff?" asked Adie.
"Borrowing," corrected Una. "Borrowing their stuff. And we'll give it back. You know, unless we can't or we forget."
***
That Saturday night, at Rachel's house, the girls gathered together and watched eagerly as Jenny opened the huge leather-bound book on the floor. She flicked through the pages to the one marked "Love Spell."
"The Great Book of the Occult," she said grandly, as the others giggled and settled themselves in a circle on the carpet, "suggests the following procedure for ‘awakening love in a reluctant other.'"
Jenny looked around and started to read.
"First, light one red candle and one white candle."
The candles were lit.
"Second, write the name of your intended love on a piece of parchment and repeat the following words:
Oh, Spirits, grant me love divine,
I wish his soul and heart be mine,
Though love, at first, may not be true,
Please make it so, I ask of you!
"Then there's an asterisk and this little note at the bottom of the page," Jenny said, turning the book so the others could read.
*Spells are performed at one's own risk. Neither the publisher nor the author is responsible for any injury/damage caused during the application of any procedures described in this publication.
The girls shrugged, then carried on chorusing the verse.
"Third and last," said Jenny, "dip the edge of the parchment into both flames and place in fireproof container."
Grace watched the smoldering paper shrink in the small bucket of sand until only a few charred pieces remained under a wisp of smoke.
"Well, that's that," said Jenny, closing the book with a snap.
"This one's going to work!" Adie's pretty olive complexion was glowing with excitement. "Grace, you'll probably have a love letter tucked into your locker door on Monday!"
"It's not going to work," said Grace. To hide her blushes, she picked up the bucket and tipped the sand into the wastepaper basket Rachel had taken from the bathroom. "And I don't care if it doesn't. Who wants to have someone sticking love letters in their locker? So embarrassing."
She was aware of all eyes on her as she left the room with the wastepaper basket's sandy remains. She hoped the fire in her cheeks would calm down by the time she returned to Rachel's room, but Adie's sympathetic smile told her it hadn't. She pretended to scratch her nose and flicked her hair over to hide her face.
"So what'll we do now?" said Una.
"I'm hungry," said Jenny. "Where did the snacks go?"
"We're saving them for a midnight feast," replied Rachel.
"And when will that be?"
"At midnight."
"And what time is it now?"
"Only ten thirty," Adie cut in.
"Are you joking?" Jenny said. "I'm not waiting 'til midnight."
She dove under a small pile of comforters, with Rachel right behind her. They struggled for a few giggling moments until Jenny emerged, victorious, with a packet of potato chips.
"And that's all you're getting!" Rachel said, swatting her with a pillow. "The rest is for later."
"Hey," said Una, "why don't we play Truth or Dare?"
"Ugh," replied Grace. "I hate that game."
"Ah, go on," said Una. "We'll each have a veto if there's a dare you really don't want to do."
"Does that work for truths as well?" asked Grace.
"We already know who you like," said Rachel, smiling, "so you won't need a veto on telling the truth."
Grace grabbed Jenny's bag of potato chips and fired it at Rachel. It bounced off her head.
"Ouch," Rachel said drily.
"I'll play," said Adie, "but no scary dares."
"Then what's the point?" cried Una.
"I'm with Adie there," said Rachel. "You always dare someone to go out to the Stone House, and there's no way I'm going out there in the dark."
The Stone House was a crumbling, ruined cottage at the end of the field next to Rachel's house. During the day, it looked lonely and broken, but at night, from the window of Rachel's bedroom, it became something sinister. The gaping roof revealed an emptiness so thick, it didn't look empty at all, and the jagged walls were like teeth, filling a dark mouth that was ready to suck in anyone who came too close...
"I don't always dare someone to go out there," argued Una. "But if I do, it's 'cause no one will do it."
"All right then," said Grace. "I dare you to walk out and touch the Stone House right now."
"We haven't started playing yet," Una said.
"Go on!" said Rachel. "If you do it, we all promise to play with no vetoes at all."
"Swear?" said Una.
"Yeah, swear," said Grace. "But you can't just walk near it and then run back. You have to stand right outside the door for at least a minute."
Una's brow furrowed, and Rachel smiled at her.
"Scared?"
"No," Una said. Getting to her feet, she pulled on her sneakers and grabbed her jacket.
"Don't let my parents see you go out!" Rachel whispered loudly as Una slipped downstairs.
The girls ran to the window and watched the bright pink jacket slowly make its way down the garden to the fence that surrounded the neighboring field. At the very end of the field, they could just make out the silhouette of the Stone House. They saw Una pause at the fence, then, in one quick, decisive motion, grab it with both hands and flip her legs over to the other side.
Everyone was silent, watching the pink jacket gradually darken as Una left the comforting light of Rachel's house behind. Grace began to feel a little queasy and wondered if it had been a good idea to goad Una into this. One by one, the girls held their breath as the pale figure, barely visible in the dark, got closer and closer to the Stone House.
Suddenly, pale arms pumped through the dark, as Una came charging back toward the garden.
"I knew it!" said Rachel. "No one's ever done it."
Within moments, Una was back in the bedroom, peeling off her jacket and panting.
"You got close!" laughed Jenny.
"But not close enough," said Grace. "We keep our vetoes."
"I heard something!" said Una breathily. The girls laughed in reply.
"No, seriously," she said. "Like voices. There was someone there, I swear!"
Everyone laughed again.
"The only things out there making noise are the sheep," said Rachel.
"Whatever," said Una, sulking. "I know I heard something."
The others exchanged smiles but knew better than to tease her any further.
Excerpted from The Demon Notebook by Erika McGann
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For Grace and her four best friends, magic is just harmless fun-until it's not... Things have gone wrong for Grace, Jenny, Rachel, Adie, and Una. Very wrong. A freak snowstorm stranded the whole school, the history teacher's gone bonkers, and their notebook has taken on a diabolical life of its own, bringing all of their previously failed spells to life. At first the girls are thrilled to see their magic finally working. But the spells are botched and people might get hurt and Una's not acting quite right... Can the girls stop the madness before the demon notebook works through their list of spells, slowly creeping towards the last, truly awful spell that they didn't really want to happen? Winner of the Waverton Good Read Children's Award for best debut novel.