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Doug Grillo is spending three weeks camping in Colorado with his geologist parents and his older brother, Gordon. He and Gordon constantly bait each other and often get into fistfights. Gordon is particularly mean about Doug's ``fear place,'' a narrow ridge above a canyon where Doug once became paralyzed with fear and now refuses to go. When news comes that Doug's Uncle Lloyd has died, Doug's parents go to Boston for the funeral, leaving Doug and Gordon alone in the woods until they return Friday morning. Naturally, Doug and Gordon fight immediately after their parents leave: Doug accuses Gordon—unfairly, he later realizes—of shirking his share of the campground duties. Gordon then ignores his mother's instructions to stay with his brother and goes off to camp by himself. While Gordon is away, Doug gets along fine. He is an expert camper and knows what he needs to do. Doug fully expects Gordon to return before his parents do, but by Friday noon, neither Gordon nor his parents have returned. Doug also realizes that Gordon must have run out of food and water by then. To get to Gordon, Doug must climb past his fear place. Doug finds Gordon with a broken leg, and he must make the perilous return trip with his brother on his back. A heart-stopping and complex story of fear, sibling rivalry, and love from veteran Naylor (Alice In-Between, p. 483, etc.; Boys Against Girls, see above). (Fiction. 8-12)"
ALA Booklist (Thu Dec 01 00:00:00 CST 1994)Talk about versatile: the writer of the poignant comedies about Alice, which began with The Agony of Alice (1985), turns here to the survival-adventure genre. Set in a remote area of the Rocky Mountains, this is a literal cliffhanger about Doug Brillo, 12, who overcomes his terror of heights to rescue the older brother he hates. Doug and his brother, Gordon, are left alone in their rough mountain camp for a few days when their parents are called away to a family funeral; the seething rivalry between the boys explodes; Gordon takes off alone, and when he doesn't return, Doug has to climb along a narrow cliff edge to find his brother and carry him back. The parents' absence is a bit contrived, but armchair adventurers will go along with it because the wilderness action is so exciting. A cougar stalks Doug and then becomes a kind of companion, always wary, almost comfortable. Doug's terror is visceral. His step-by-step journey across those few terrible feet of precipice makes you hold your breath. Just as compelling is the intensity of rage between the brothers and their hard work to overcome their hostility and get home. (Reviewed December 15, 1994)
School Library JournalGr 5-8-A three-week trip to the Colorado Rockies is marred when Doug and Gordon's parents must go to Boston for a funeral and leave the boys alone at the campsite. With no one there to referee, their bickering escalates, and Gordon goes off to camp higher up in the mountains by himself. Doug's hours pass slowly until a cougar begins visiting him regularly. After a few days, Gordon has still not returned, so Doug sets out to find him; the cougar follows. Helped by his observations of the cougar, he overcomes his fear of heights, hiking across a narrow ledge with a sheer drop-off, and finds his brother, who has broken his leg. The return trip is harrowing, but they make it. This story is suspenseful enough to keep readers turning the pages. The sibling rivalry is the most believable part of the plot; the dialogue is snappy and portrays the difficult relationship well. The boys' mother's poor relationship with her brother (who has just died) serves as a telling counterpoint to her sons' problems. Not so believable is the idea that parents would leave their adolescent children alone in such a remote area. The rapport between Doug and the cougar also strains credibility. Nevertheless, the conclusion is satisfying-surviving a life-threatening situation does cause the boys to reflect on their situation, and readers know they will return home all the wiser.-Bruce Anne Shook, Mendenhall Middle School, Greensboro, NC
Horn Book (Fri Apr 01 00:00:00 CST 1994)Antagonism between brothers plays out in a dramatic setting high in the Rocky Mountains when two boys are left to fend for themselves in a remote campsite. Twelve-year-old Doug grapples with an overwhelming fear of heights, is befriended by a cougar, and executes a gripping rescue mission. Skepticism aside, the book is an absorbing read.
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ALA Booklist (Thu Dec 01 00:00:00 CST 1994)
School Library Journal
Wilson's Children's Catalog
Bulletin of the Center for Children's Books
NCTE Your Reading
NCTE Adventuring With Books
Horn Book (Fri Apr 01 00:00:00 CST 1994)
Wilson's Junior High Catalog
"If it was a cougar, it was probably passing through," his father told him when Doug brought it up again. "Idaho. Now that's where you'll find the cougars."
Doug gave up then, and worked on trying to get a picture of a deer.
"Take good pictures of two kinds of mammals in the wild," the requirements in his Scout manual read. "Record light conditions, film used, exposure, and other factors, including notes on the activities of the pictured animals."
Also: "Spend three hours of each of five days on at least a twenty-five acre area. List the mammal species you identified by sight or sound."
This would take some doing. He'd love to get a photo of a beaver, but they came out at night, and he wasn't sure he'd brought the right film.
"You still working on the wimp badge?" Gordon asked him one evening as he lay on his sleeping bag, listening to his Walkman.
"You're such a wonder, how come you did Leatherwork?" Doug retorted. Why did he fall into these traps? But he kept on.
"How come you did Insect Study?" He let his voice rise delicately on the words, Insect Study.
"You have a problem with that?"
That's the way it always went. Gordon would start something and when Doug gave back as good as he got, Gordon would say, "You have a problem with that?" or "Think you're smart?" and before you knew it, there would be a fight. Why didn't Doug ever remember to say, "You have a problem with that?"
"Yeah, I have a problem with that," Doug said, barreling on. "The guy who's always talking big is going to stand up in front of the troop and get his 'buggie badge.' Gordie's gonna get a badge with a big bad cricket on it."
"You're gonna get a little squirrel on yours, so why are you spouting off?"
Doug couldn't hold back. He had a trump card he'd been saving, and decided to play it now. "You know those envelopes you mailed out for Mom? About the Court of Honor? You know those stamps you promised to put on?"
Gordon glanced over quickly.
"You know how you were complaining they were all stuck together? Well, that's because I sprinkled pee on them and let them dry."
He made for an opening in the tent, but Gordon tackled him and the fight was on. And all the while Doug was yelling he was laughing, too. He didn't even mind the punches. Got some in himself. Just the thought of Gordon licking those peed-on stamps was worth it.
Usually their parents let them fight things out. Gordon's punches were quicker, but Doug hit harder. In any case, they always stopped short of homicide. This time, however, Mother's voice came shouting over the scuffle: "Damn it, I want this stopped!"
It was not the way she usually talked. Not the way at all.
Doug pulled his leg off Gordon. His elbow was bleeding.
"Likeanimals!" Mother was standing at the door of the ten now. Her voice seemed to fill up all the space in the clearing. "We come out here to give you boys an experience that most kids would give anything to have, and you spend it fighting with each other. I'msickof the quarreling. Sick to death of this ridiculous, idiotic, insane bickering over the slightest little thing!"
"Doug just told me..." Gordon began.
"I don't want tohearwhat Doug told you. I want peace. I have enough on my mind without this. Do you understand?" He voice was shrill.
"Yes," Doug answered.
Gordon nodded.
She stalked off toward the woods then, and Doug noticed that her chin trembled. Were they really that bad? It had to be more than just the fight. They'd fought dozens of times before, and worse than this, too. Her worry over Uncle Lloyd, no doubt. The outburst probably didn't have much to do with them at all.
Gordon, however, still furious, took Doug's backpack a overturned it onto the ground. Underpants, T-shirts, half-worn socks rolled up in balls, sweat shirts...
Doug didn't try to stop him, didn't even go over and empty out his. He just waited until Gordon had stomped outside, then tore a page out of his notebook and in big letters, wrote GORDIE LICKS PEE, and laid it on Gordon's sleeping bag.
Excerpted from The Fear Place by Phyllis Reynolds Naylor
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For Doug's brother, Gordie, the ridge with its spectacular view is a magical, special place, but for Doug, it's The Fear Place. Two years ago, Doug hiked to the ridge during his family's annual camping trip, and he vowed never again to cross the narrow ledge from which the earth dropped away six hundred feet to the canyon below.
But now the boys' parents have been called from their vacation by a family emergency, and Doug and Gordie are alone in the wilderness. After one of their seemingly endless fights, Gordie has stomped away from their campsite. When Girdle doesn't return, Doug fears the worst, particularly when he hears reports that a cougar has been sighted nearby. Doug knows he has to go after his brother, and he knows where he will find him. What he can't imagine is the surprising source of the courage to overcome his fears.